Ok, I'm an idiot, and just posted both of these to the wrong effing blogs.
HAHAHAHA!!!! That's fine. We can critique them here.
Lol,that's great. I think once you blow off the guys head he should slowly fall forward off the cliff then the machine just leaves. Unless you are using a ray gun that incinerates the head off the character, he's gonna feel some of the force of the, whatever is coming out of that barrel. but I like it!
Thanks Chad. I just cheeped out on the bits from his head. I'd like to make some changes and finish it. Its got some flubs in it that were unintentional, like the jitter of the barrel.